William has suffered through the Civil war and survived his entire family including his fiance. Now to have shipwrecked on an island in the middle of nowhere that is not on any map, He knew his luck was rotten but this is taking it to far. Captured and taken to serve in an army that is not his, he has decided that his luck has finally dealt him a fatal blow. That is until he meets Princess Na-Lisa. She is stubborn and vivacious. He knows he must help her to get away from her uncle and his disgusting plans. Can he beat his rotten luck against all odds to save them both?
Na-Lisa's world has been turned upside down by the death of her father the king and her brother. Her uncle has taken over and has great plans for the kingdom. Plans that include her. She is determined not to go along with them even if it means her untimely demise. She must get out or risk her immortal soul. Can she trust William to save her or is her just one of her uncle's mindless minions?
http://www.amazon.com/A-Gentlemans-Luck-ebook/dp/B006IWUA3Q
Na-Lisa's world has been turned upside down by the death of her father the king and her brother. Her uncle has taken over and has great plans for the kingdom. Plans that include her. She is determined not to go along with them even if it means her untimely demise. She must get out or risk her immortal soul. Can she trust William to save her or is her just one of her uncle's mindless minions?
http://www.amazon.com/A-Gentlemans-Luck-ebook/dp/B006IWUA3Q
Review:
ReplyDeleteReview by: Stacey Jaine McIntosh on Dec. 16, 2011 :
The idea was good but it badly needs to be proofread and formatted.
Review by: J.M. Perkins on Dec. 16, 2011 :
ReplyDeleteCute story, but poorly written. Gramatical errors make it sometimes difficult to read.
In response to the reviews: I know. Editor I am not. It would be nice if I had the money to pay an editor, but for now, Trial and error. I did figure out how to fix some of the issues and when I uploaded it to smashword today, it did not give any auto errors and is pending approval for the premium list. So I think I fixed most of the issues. Sucks to learn as I go. It is so tedious and I always end up writing more or adding to the story. Hopefully the next reviews are better. But at least they are liking the story just not the editing.
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